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lj0808
over 11 years ago

Good intro with the drums, and then layering the keyboard. I would fade the keyboard out to bring in the third loop, so the transition is not so abrupt. Actually, I notice some elements of form with your piece: the drums hold the piece together, and you bring each loop in and out. The places where the drums solo are the A section coming back in ABACADA... this is called rondo form in classical music. Your ending is abrupt, unfinished. Figure out how to close it, use the automate volume to decrescendo, or find a surprise sound in the library! Creative work!

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