Not bad, however, my advice would be to add a "pick-up" or "carrying" - beat in the mix with the flow of the rhythm. Also, I noticed some skipping in the lead. Other than that, you're headed in the right direction. If you respect HipHop, check out a couple of my tracks for inspiration! ;)
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andre the kid
tru thanks man
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Not bad, however, my advice would be to add a "pick-up" or "carrying" - beat in the mix with the flow of the rhythm. Also, I noticed some skipping in the lead. Other than that, you're headed in the right direction. If you respect HipHop, check out a couple of my tracks for inspiration! ;)