What you need to work on in the future is not to make each section so long. Also, I think you could of worked on the A section more because the sounds to don't sound so good together. But I liked the B section. Overall it was nice but just need to work on the sounds to make sure they blend in amazing and not make each section so long.
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Loghan Alexander
Plus another good thing was what Jack said you did keep the rondo form. ABACA
Loghan Alexander
What you need to work on in the future is not to make each section so long. Also, I think you could of worked on the A section more because the sounds to don't sound so good together. But I liked the B section. Overall it was nice but just need to work on the sounds to make sure they blend in amazing and not make each section so long.
Sarah Hermann
agree with Daniel but, good job
Laken Sherrod
Agree with daniel but awesome otherwise
Jackson Malloy
I agree with Daniel, but it is definetly a rondo form.
Anthony Graceffo
Cool!
Daniel Kimpton
i think the A is to long