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LIL TJ
almost 4 years ago

brooo it so good it stuck in my head

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LIL TJ
almost 4 years ago

niceeeeee

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

the surgeons took the defibrillators and shocked and shocked but nothing they try several more times nothing...nothing...and nothing eventually giving up jared...dies a horrible death...all alone...on an operating table...trinket has his revenge...that is the end. do you think I make a good story teller? tell me in the comments.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

he feels the teeth sinking further and further in he screams and screams when suddenly he hears a voice "the patient is suffering cardiac arrest get someone in here...NOW!" he lets out a scream then suddenly he's back in reality his heart pounding his chest aching with pain and with a moments notice he's unconscious and barely breathing..."he might not make it." he hears a voice before everything goes black.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

the mother sits and stares expressionless "mom...say something...please. jared says faintly the mother's mouth begins stretching and pulling apart "no...it's just a dream...come on...WAKE UP JARED!!!" he shouts a blood curdling screech fills the room...that is when his mother lunges at him.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

he sees his vision darkening his skin shriveling after awhile everything goes dark "this is it...this is how I end." jared whispers to himself moments later he wakes up in bed with his mother standing over him "mom?" he whispers he thought he was awoken from that nightmare...he was wrong.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

he feels a sharp pain fill his back he feels all the blood getting leached from his body "I'm going to drain every last drop..." the creature says "n-no" jared stammers there is no hope for escape jared knew he was going to die here that's when jared breaks he begins to think it's all real that he was truly dying...or so he thought.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

when he turns to face the darkness behind him he knows the creature is lurking he winds back ready to take a swing he sees it and takes a swing as hard as he can when suddenly silence...he hears a cackle "heh heh heh did you really think that would hurt me?" he hears the same voice from before.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

after the final turn jared realizes it's been looping only difference it seems to get more and more decayed he sees a pipe sticking out of a pile of rubble ha graps it and pulls it comes out with relative ease he readies himself for an attack only to see...it's gone.

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Space Vibes
almost 4 years ago

all there seems to be is corridor after corridor jared can't seem to shake it the screeching...creeping closer...and closer...

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