Check the beat number of the melody coming in at 00:11 (currently between beat 1 and 2)
Keep to multiples of 4 so that listeners are able to follow/tap along as they listen to the song. Could possibly layer melody and rhythm together as you work on the rest of the song to have thicker texture (number of sounds) rather than melody and rhythm playing separately.
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nadione
Very good mixture of sounds. Very good beats for the song. Also an awkward transition in 00:11-00:12. So yeah. Overall good job guys.
tanwensiu
Check the beat number of the melody coming in at 00:11 (currently between beat 1 and 2) Keep to multiples of 4 so that listeners are able to follow/tap along as they listen to the song. Could possibly layer melody and rhythm together as you work on the rest of the song to have thicker texture (number of sounds) rather than melody and rhythm playing separately.