GG for this song
Tbh your points are right, my big problem is repetition, although if there were lyrics over the top of this as I had half a mind to do that would kill it off. Summer in london, with the exception of the noiser is probably more repetitive than this though, its just the bit after the drop here that seems looped for way too long. I will work on switching things up a lot more in future 👍
Because in a lot of spots where you could have added momentum or atmosphere to the song, you went with a more minimalistic approach, and even though I can respect that you probably had a bigger vision you were trying to achieve with this song, a lot of parts just sound like they were copied and pasted and then you did nothing to change it so even though parts of it were alright I had trouble listening the whole way through.
It's repetitive and the hook isn't as good as it with your other songs, like comparing this with your other featured song, Summers in London, even though they're both essentially the same melody played over and over again, the latter does more to make the song interesting with an atmospheric noiser, a changed in the feeling of the tempo with a different drum pattern, and different lead instruments that add to the atmosphere. This song, although having potential, isn't at that same level to me
5 is broadly a review which says there is as much good as bad. I'm always looking to improve... what did you think wasn't so good with the song? May make a VIP at some stage
I have wanted to say this, I don't think this is your best but honestly your 5/10 is probably more deserving of a feature than a newbie's 5/10 which might just be a result of beginner's luck rather than talent.
meant to also add, check out my soundcloud lmao https://soundcloud.com/tbabble