Ya it’s much better but you should consider adding a beat to your tracks
Thinking about it... Yeah your right, it doesn't go anywhere. it still needs a bit more to it. I add a melody to it but nothing else. The background should have some sort of change to it and I should be dropping the static noises after the new melody comes into play. From there I should probably add some soft percussion sounds to maybe imitate a heartbeat slowly getting faster. There should also be a few stab chords to grab the attention of the audience and to maybe get them to jump or at least feel more uneasy... Okay boys, I've got some work to do.
Reminds me of a Ghost painting :-6
It’s creepy I suppose but it doesn’t really go anywhere.