I would take everybody's advice on this one bro. The main melody notes are way out of key and need to be fixed up very badly. 音の戦士C has a good point about the drums being harder in sound. @KryptiK Beatz pointed out that you should make a standard beat and I agree. The transitions are also very random and it gets repetitive really fast. This is the best song I have heard from you though, keep it up.
Hey, this is a really great job, bro~! Okay, so here is where you need to fix the song: pretty much from the beginning until about 40 - 45 seconds into the song the notation needs some work. Nothing major, mostly key and octave changes. I am guessing the Key Of F or G are the melodic hit points but the chords C, F, G and C, Eb, Gb really help build a flow. However, just after that point, you basically have a working melody and steady beat going in the rhythm. I think, IMHO, the drums could be harder in sound but not too hard. Maybe make the kick drums a little louder, harder?
Dam I jus realised that I messed up on the PIANO NOTES AGAIN
But!!!!!! I like those BETTER.. just need to fix them up a bit.
HEY GUYS :) do u think I've improved.
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TWISTED THOUGHTZ
Thx for all your support on this guys... I REALLY NEED HELP. ANYONE?
Foresight
I would take everybody's advice on this one bro. The main melody notes are way out of key and need to be fixed up very badly. 音の戦士C has a good point about the drums being harder in sound. @KryptiK Beatz pointed out that you should make a standard beat and I agree. The transitions are also very random and it gets repetitive really fast. This is the best song I have heard from you though, keep it up.
KryptiK BeatZ
i think you should throw in a standard kick, snare pattern to make a nice flowing beat.
The Uncommon Effect
Pretty good! The notes need some editing.. some pitches just don't add up. Other than that.. great work!
平和の島
Throw in a sub bass sound to accompany the kick drums. That's what I am thinking. <_<
平和の島
Hey, this is a really great job, bro~! Okay, so here is where you need to fix the song: pretty much from the beginning until about 40 - 45 seconds into the song the notation needs some work. Nothing major, mostly key and octave changes. I am guessing the Key Of F or G are the melodic hit points but the chords C, F, G and C, Eb, Gb really help build a flow. However, just after that point, you basically have a working melody and steady beat going in the rhythm. I think, IMHO, the drums could be harder in sound but not too hard. Maybe make the kick drums a little louder, harder?
slicknick3409
Sound is coming together... Piano notes need a little fixing but other then that its a solid track.. keep it up..
M-possible
Cool track, but I think that you should put some sort of slick beat in it and just like you said, fix the notes up to. Dropped a like for you.
TWISTED THOUGHTZ
Dam I jus realised that I messed up on the PIANO NOTES AGAIN But!!!!!! I like those BETTER.. just need to fix them up a bit. HEY GUYS :) do u think I've improved.
TWISTED THOUGHTZ
Can EVERYONE post sum comments on this..? Please I'm finished. Until Monday wen I can add sum more into it..... FEEDBACK anyone......