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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Good work! In your A section, I think your Bass line is fighting your guitar parts. I'd cut it or change it. Your B section works pretty well, and your C section just needs a melody line (try a synth part or an instrument part). Nice start, see if you can fix the things I just mentioned. Good luck!

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