Your transitions are still rough and your melody doesnt really fit. I also think that if you EQd it to bring out a bit more of the piano, it'd be better. It's not really bad, just not good. The piano chords are nice.
I think this is my favorite hex song rn not that I have bothered listening to most of his discography lol, but even saying that I am sure he'll make a better song one day :3
@shards the melody/arp/chords mismatch sounds like it could have been intentional imo, also the main chords being meh gives space for the arp and other elements to be weirder I think lol.
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TENEBRIS
Your transitions are still rough and your melody doesnt really fit. I also think that if you EQd it to bring out a bit more of the piano, it'd be better. It's not really bad, just not good. The piano chords are nice.
Katze
I think this is my favorite hex song rn not that I have bothered listening to most of his discography lol, but even saying that I am sure he'll make a better song one day :3
Katze
@shards the melody/arp/chords mismatch sounds like it could have been intentional imo, also the main chords being meh gives space for the arp and other elements to be weirder I think lol.
Shards
everything else is fine tho (except for the main chords, they are too mono)
Shards
bruh, the arp and the chords and the melody dont match
arbour
dude this is clean, nice
MiSix ♪
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