I agree with foogie, but it does sound good. maybe work on the build up just before the kick, i would add a noise/synth rise or snares getting faster or something.
only the beginning but it really didn't sound like mine. U didn't really have much hard dance beats or noises in the background to go with it. I felt like u could have done way more with it
it sounds like bass4rogs song "my mental getaway"