The kick is weak asf tbh, I would give you one to use that would work really well but the sample itself is clipping and wOuld sound like a high end click in soundation.
besides that, it’s distorting a little/overlimited and I feel like you could have gained some sound quality if you just turned the gain down a little. Besides that, I like your layering and how it’s not empty. Vocal samples were a good creative choice but could have been implemented and mixed better, try to focus on cleaning up a lot of your mixing and muddiness. Sound quality is generally more important than actual volume.