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SoulessAroun' Avatar
SoulessAroun'
almost 8 years ago

Even if you have a 4 bar drum loop, the kicks and hi hat have the same exact short repetitive pattern. Work on making them be longer and less repetitive.

GøldenBeats  Avatar
GøldenBeats
almost 8 years ago

Oh and Phantomtracks my drum loop is not 2 bars long.You may not hear the other part though

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GøldenBeats
almost 8 years ago

Thanks for feedback! @Phøenix Øfficial ! I'll check that out.I kinda wanted to keep the va synth.I'm not sure if both would sound good together.

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SoulessAroun'
almost 8 years ago

Well your melody making seems like it certainly as improved. I'm not sure if the synths at the end were in key, it was kinda hard to tell. Now one thing I would highly suggest is use patterns. And also make sure your drum loops are atleast 4 bars long and not 2. You need to do more with the kick and way more with the hi hat. This is definitely an improvement.

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Nesta Malcolm
almost 8 years ago

Good so far! its all on beat and in key! maybe change the va synth to a pan flute? it in the gm-2 wind section

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GøldenBeats
almost 8 years ago

Thanks Oo!zie.I'm not a big filter user.I'll figure that out XD.

Ooz!e454 (Using the studio limitedly) Avatar

you can try to add a "filter" FX on this noise, setting to: lowpass and mid ressonance.

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GøldenBeats
almost 8 years ago

Thank you:)

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Eden Pigeon ♪
almost 8 years ago

Well I like it.

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