@NOLLIJ I think I found the problem for the rhythm thing maybe. I was confused what you meant at first, but when I checked I found that in the drum loop the third kick drum was 1/64 beat behind the and of 2. I actually don't know why it was like that.
I feel some of the drums are off rhythm by a bit but your synths are really good
well in that context, its great, just dont have the snare so distorted
@VCNT_MND Yea I was noticing that too. I was thinking of waiting a little while before asking that, because I feel this is a more climactic part for the song, and I was feeling my adjustments made it less punchy, but I wasn't sure if I was only perceiving such because I kept listening to this and the muddy version back to back.
much better, but the drums need to be more punchy
Much better! :D