I agree with Katze. Didn't realize the friction until I read her comment. The track's a little repetive. To my ears, the vocals are the most tired after repetition, so you should change them at 00:53 or sooner, maybe cut them up and rearrange them or pitch stretch - 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨. Also, you could harmonize the piano at some point. This track is an interesting combonation and I think it has a lot of potential🙂
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Fmgnoble🗣💯🚶🏾♂️4 years ago
i did leave but i came back
little hollow 4 years ago
I thought you said you were leaving lol
Fmgnoble🗣💯🚶🏾♂️4 years ago
thx
Peachesꕥ (inactive)4 years ago
I agree with Katze. Didn't realize the friction until I read her comment. The track's a little repetive. To my ears, the vocals are the most tired after repetition, so you should change them at 00:53 or sooner, maybe cut them up and rearrange them or pitch stretch - 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨. Also, you could harmonize the piano at some point. This track is an interesting combonation and I think it has a lot of potential🙂
Katze4 years ago
None of the elements seem to be in key with each other.
Fmgnoble🗣💯🚶🏾♂️4 years ago
thx
Gizmo10184 years ago
no problemo buddy... it was really good... i like your stuff
Fmgnoble🗣💯🚶🏾♂️4 years ago
thx
Fmgnoble🗣💯🚶🏾♂️4 years ago
lol
Kiani #kiko 4 years ago
this is what i hear every story everything