falling

i did leave but i came back

I thought you said you were leaving lol

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I agree with Katze. Didn't realize the friction until I read her comment. The track's a little repetive. To my ears, the vocals are the most tired after repetition, so you should change them at 00:53 or sooner, maybe cut them up and rearrange them or pitch stretch - 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨. Also, you could harmonize the piano at some point. This track is an interesting combonation and I think it has a lot of potential🙂

None of the elements seem to be in key with each other.

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no problemo buddy... it was really good... i like your stuff

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lol

this is what i hear every story everything