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it would sound better if you made it more hardcore dubstep. Or you could even change it into hybrid trap if you tried hard enough.

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zi sniper
about 4 years ago

amazing love it

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Clever Whiz
about 4 years ago

Thank you elizalde, it is good to hear that I am improving! :D

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Foresight
about 4 years ago

Separate the kick and snare. You have them layered throughout the song and it adds a bunch of unnecessary lows to the snare and just sounds kinda awkward overall! Your transitions could be a bit smoother, like the one after the drop and the one that leads back into the piano at 3:01. Try to add some more variation throughout the track as well, you repeat the same chord progression the whole time and don't have a main melody or anything to keep interest. Honestly though I'm really impressed, this is a huge improvement from what I last heard from you! Keep it up :)

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Foresight
about 4 years ago

Not bad dude! I can definitely hear how you tried out panning like I suggested, you did a pretty good job doing that! The drums need more compression, they're rather weak and don't have enough punch or smack as I'd like them to. Try hipassing your white noise a little bit more next time, it keeps it out of the way :) The drop had a very nice idea, but next time I'd love to hear some cleaner sounds and maybe a few more of them? Listen to any dubstep song and you'll easily be able to hear how quickly the sounds change, try creating a few clean sounds just like that. In Dubstep you also want to

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Clever Whiz
about 4 years ago

@OPC yeah, I noticed that too. :/ That chord pisses me off! Thanks for the feedback! :D

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Clever Whiz
about 4 years ago

don't worry any feedback is allowed @ARONSON! :D

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yung tomb$tone
about 4 years ago

I just want to say this. My previous comment wasn't a negative, just feedback, I actually really like this.

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Clever Whiz
about 4 years ago

Also thank you for the reccomendations for feature @Sound Bender and @KryptiK Beatz!

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Clever Whiz
about 4 years ago

Thanks guys! :D good to hear that I am improving!

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