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Unorthadox Avatar
Unorthadox
about 9 years ago

Thanks everyone! I am happy to hear that it's a good start. I'll work on a VIP at some point. As for now, different things are on my mind production-wise.

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Audial
about 9 years ago

My problem is that for the most part there is only one idea just played on different instruments, there are no clear harmony/melody, it's all jumbled into one, instead of just doing octave doubling ,you should try to introduce new ideas as it progresses rather than just new instruments (e.g. a nice arpeggio played on a plucky synth or mono or something) otherwise I actually really enjoyed listening to it, especially where you bring the drums in.

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Kracked Ekho / illRipper
about 9 years ago

yea any song can be redone but its about redoing it better and fixing mistakes in the previous version

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Unorthadox
about 9 years ago

Thanks for the feeback! Oozzie, I realize that this song is extremely repetitive, and that was by design. It could use some work, to make it seem more like a song, then a repeating loop. Thanks for listening. Do you think it's worth a remaster/VIP? If so, I will see what I can do.

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Oozzie
about 9 years ago

pretty good, i would suggest adding a few variations in the keyline here and there, subtle but obvious ones that'll stand out and probably take the listener by surprise, and since the keyline plays twice before a new instrument is introduced, try adding some kind of build up factor before a new instrument comes in like some reverse symbols, white noise rising in volume or a kick or snare growing more and more frequent.just a suggestion

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Kracked Ekho / illRipper
about 9 years ago

not bad i like this. i think you should try to create some custom sounds in the wubmachine

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