Put more bass and also try to make the full song not always the same. Belive me thats a common mistake. But this is really good. Oh one more thing: try and make the beat one with the track. It is also a common mistake that people do the track before the beat. Now that it is already done try and figure out how to make the beat and the track flow together. Keep it up ur doing really well!
Ok,thanks!I'll try to remember:)
you should totally make a full song!
Like the melody its great, but u kinda mess up on the beat part.
Alright,thanks!I'm still thinking about it,but as I said,I'm not going to do the full song right now
I think this sounds great. And maybe instead of a 'bass' bass line you could use the low piano notes instead.
Alright,thanks!Ima wait a little before I make it,possibly to see what other people think,but I'm still thinking about making a full song!:)
Definitely make a full song of this! Again, what LIL-R said, maybe add some bass, possibly by using the SuperSaw virtual instrument, detune being at 10%, everything else left unchanged. Maybe add some string instruments, like tremolo instead for a more natural effect. Good luck!