I like how you added the drums, but at 1:12 I would stop making the sweep louder because it makes it harder to hear the melody, or you could make the melody louder just at that one part.
Needs some different bass freqs
This sounds pretty chill... Drums could be a little less loud and maybe add a degrader to them as well...just make sure that the degrader's gain is really low and add a lowpass filter to get rid of the high frequency noise from the degrader. Now to go recommend
woah cool :3