IDK how I managed to check in here right on time with that ("less than a minute ago") reply. And sure you're new, I'll give you that. With more practice, even if still done by ear, you should be able to improve upon it. ☺
To: Keylime Pie: I'm still pretty new to making music and most the time i just go by ear instead of looking at keys. I know its not the most efficient way but I'm working on it
So here's my feedback. It seems to me that whenever you add parts together, they seem to disagree in key. The start of the song established a chord pattern, but then at 0:13 the other parts don't seem to follow along. Not saying one can't break the key, but with more experience, you can perhaps learn some rules with key signature and chords so then you can know how to keep things in key or break the rules well if you so desire.