Thanks for the tip! I made it in my spare time and guess didn’t try hard really. I appreciate the tip tho!
You should maybe use loops less, and start getting song structure building. I like the idea, but emotion/story isn't quite there. If you're going for hard trap vibes make it 'dark' (ex. Piano, low bass, triplets, 808 or something), i'm not quit the expert but these are the some points in music theory. Practice! Go wild with making beats! You will get better in time.