the lyrics are nice! as far as the beat and sound design goes, I have a couple of points. The samples you put together aren't quite in a compatible key. They work but it feels a little off. Second (and I'm not quite sure how do do this well myself but just a suggestion) try playing around with the effects a little more on the voice. I saw you were already trying to do some echo effects. The panning is pretty cool! maybe some para-eq and some more reverb and delay would be nice. Just a suggestion to fiddle with, may or may not work. :) cool track overall!
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Bright Beats
the lyrics are nice! as far as the beat and sound design goes, I have a couple of points. The samples you put together aren't quite in a compatible key. They work but it feels a little off. Second (and I'm not quite sure how do do this well myself but just a suggestion) try playing around with the effects a little more on the voice. I saw you were already trying to do some echo effects. The panning is pretty cool! maybe some para-eq and some more reverb and delay would be nice. Just a suggestion to fiddle with, may or may not work. :) cool track overall!
WICK BEATZ
nice bro