Angelization
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In the quiet glow of evening's light,
Where whispered dreams take graceful flight,
A melody dances on the air,
An angel's song, a call to care.
With every note, the heart ascends,
Through shadowed paths where hope transcends.
Wings of kindness gently unfold,
Painting the skies in colors bold.
Let the music rise, a beacon bright,
Together we’ll soar into the night.
In this moment, pure and divine,
We find our strength in love's design.
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SunshineSugar156719 days ago
The song feels more aggressively happy like "High Hopes" by Panic! At The Disco, than it does "whispered dreams taking flight". If you want to focus on building songs that describe atmosphere, I'd recommend focusing on making the song feel more like the words or the words sounding more like the song. (However, that's optional, you did certainly a lot better than I did for a first song.)
ConXtunesa month ago
This is my first song, I have no experience making songs, but hopefully you enjoy it. Constructive criticism is encouraged.