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WIbblyWobbly-JB
about 10 years ago

I like the song, but some of the clips are clashing, I think it the clanking beat. There is a lot going on, and I agree with Smerkalot that it's overwhelming. The clips you chose are fantastic on their own, but you may want to rethink how they work together.

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Smerkalot
about 10 years ago

Wait at least 4 measures before you introduce more clips. Have just that low melodic clip by itself in that time. I do like the light bouncy sound, that can come in a later. Check the volume on that repetative bass line, it is overwhelming your other sounds slightly. Cool start, totally digging it so far!

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