Awesome job! I like the way it sounds and has a nice rhythm. You should think about being a music producer one day.
Wow, Matthew, there is a lot going on in this piece! I have to admit, that while I like all the different sounds, I can't find where the A, B, and C sections are, or hear the A section coming back around (ABACA). While it's impressive that you've come up with so much music, you're going to have to cut this down quite a bit so we can hear the three different sections. You can do it! Pick ONE melody (a part you can sing, like a synth or an instrument) for each section and go with it. Good luck!