This is really quite empty, and very repetitive. The saw lead is headache-inducing. (Not trying to be mean here, just leaving some feedback.)
Again - @Flood it's my first attempt at bigroom. I don't exactly know how to make the drums PERfect.
i think there is someting unharmonic in the piano.. i agree with shadowplaya- the drums arent good
Yea, no matter if it's the first attempt or not you should always fill it up as much as possible.
Well, when I "first attempt" a genre I've never made before, I don't really try too hard to fill up everything. I believe I have about 8-10 channels in here though. maybe 7.
You really need to start making more synths to fill up your songs man. How many channels do you have in here? Just to get the basics of your track you'll need at least 15... Crash, hi hat, kick, snare, ride (if wanted). Lead synth, harmony synth, piano, multiple pads, noise rises, white noise, synth risers, a sub bass and basses if you need them. Your tracks should be way more full than they are. You have all these good ideas but then you don't add on to them :/ Don't get me wrong, your tracks have great potential. Their just not executed like they should be.
meh...First attempts arent ever the best for me :\
I think its very creative but I really dont like the drums