Hey McKenna! This is a good start, but each of your sections sound like they have mini sections inside of them. For example, if the A sections, I hear 3 different fragments of a song. You will need to go through each section, pick the part you like the best, and delete the extra stuff. Just extend the parts you love! Keep it simple: each section should have a melody, a rhythm and an extra clip that all sound well when stacked together. Try again, see me if you need help!
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kdog jams10 years ago
I think the whole song it wonderful i personally love the a section
The Pokemon Master10 years ago
i think u should add more sounds
Lantz Beatz10 years ago
Hey McKenna! This is a good start, but each of your sections sound like they have mini sections inside of them. For example, if the A sections, I hear 3 different fragments of a song. You will need to go through each section, pick the part you like the best, and delete the extra stuff. Just extend the parts you love! Keep it simple: each section should have a melody, a rhythm and an extra clip that all sound well when stacked together. Try again, see me if you need help!
snake33333310 years ago
my faviort pat i like the most is a because i love how you did really good with the beging f the a section