Thanks for all you great comments. I am now putting these comments into action, with my new updated 'Dancing on Cloud 9' track!
I may be just be a bit bias, but I would have made the main melody be piano. Other than that, I have nothing short of what the others have mentioned. This is a great piece!! You should add to it. You have the right idea, you simply need to give it more depth. Think of what you have so far as the skeleton of your song. Then have it bloom from the skeleton into something fuller. It has great potential. Take more time on it. Add some more harmonies, drums, ect; you already have a good sense of structure. just work off of it :) hope this helps! Good luck!!
Not bad, not bad at all :)
I agree with Dusk and BlueCanoe, this sounds really good though, if you add in what the others have said this is gonna be amazing
It's very nice needs some bass, turn up the drums, and in the middle turn up piano, change up near bridge as well. Otherwise great song!!!
It is lacking bass, and as the BlueCanoe said the main melody instrument could change, but the the musicality is really top notch
nice track, but i think you could add more bass or tune the lead a bit.
I would also talk to Duskmusicuk. He'll have great advice. He's a really great electro house maker on soundation.
I agree with Snow Fox. The drums could be a bit harder. I also think the melody instrument could have been different. The basic principles are all there. It just needs practice.
It's a bit repetitive, there isn't that much change. The drums could use some work. Buuuuut it's good, I like it.