abaca rough draft

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Over 9 years ago

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ErinRocks Avatar
ErinRocks10 years ago
hi peoples
Lantz Beatz Avatar
Lantz Beatz10 years ago
Hey Erin! Couple things: I would add drums or another beat pattern to your A sections, cut the dead space throughout the song (where the song goes quiet), and give your C section a melody (something you can sing, like a synth line or an instrument sound). Fix those few things and you'll have an amazing project!