scary string part one

I am a new comer to the world of Soundation and would like to work with this platform to make my own music if you liked this song then please tell me that what I should keep and what I need work on. I my self have allways liked music in a scary kind of feel in makes me feel like I am the monster in the dark, but that may not be the smae for others. Hope you like the part I made if it is something I should keep doing please tell me.