Hey good work but i thing you should get rid of the last part it sounded like that was over powering the other parts but other than that it sounds good oh yeah i forgot to mention that it was little bit short might want to add something some more beats
I love your song it flows very well!
Short, sweet and to the point! Each of your sections need something: Your A sections need a melody (something you can sing, a synth or a bass line), and you need another A section at the end of the piece (just copy and paste what you already have). Your B section needs a rhythm part, drums or beats, and your C section needs one more part to make it special. You have a lot of work to do, get on it:)