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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Not a bad start, although your A section sounds a lot like one of my pieces! Your B and C sections need to be edited. There are a LOT of sounds in each of them, I'd choose your 3 favorite sounds and make them the focus of your piece. The rest? Delete it! Sometimes simple is better:) See me if you need help, good luck!