Jarring (forgot to turn off reverb)

Most of my songs are lower qaulity for a reason, but usually they turn out kind of... Bland? Honestly this was supposed to be expiramental, but turned out really weird... I wonder though what my songs would sound like with a rapper. Song sounds like nearing Carti mixed with Hip - Hop and heavy mixing, but sounds almost evil, and honestly kind of Unfinished. I probably wont finish though. Probably move on, I have a bit of time.