the first movent is truly beautiful. the layers are amazing. the chords a re a bit repettive though you could do a 4 chord progression instead of 2.
the second movement is really funky and with a beat and a few mor layers it couuld be a proper song. the third movent is okay spare the fact that there is some werid layer going on in the back round, making the whole thing dissonant.
but with a little work, and in separate song these could all be very, very good
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XWolf EDM 6 years ago
the first movent is truly beautiful. the layers are amazing. the chords a re a bit repettive though you could do a 4 chord progression instead of 2. the second movement is really funky and with a beat and a few mor layers it couuld be a proper song. the third movent is okay spare the fact that there is some werid layer going on in the back round, making the whole thing dissonant. but with a little work, and in separate song these could all be very, very good
SideShow6 years ago
Tell me whether or not this is a good or bad thing XD