Good work. I'd add a rhythm part to your B section and take out one of the synth lines to make it sound cleaner. I like the first half of your C section, but the second half seems unnecessary. Cut it, and then make the first part longer by adding rhythms or drum beats to it. Best of luck!
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Lantz Beatz10 years ago
Good work. I'd add a rhythm part to your B section and take out one of the synth lines to make it sound cleaner. I like the first half of your C section, but the second half seems unnecessary. Cut it, and then make the first part longer by adding rhythms or drum beats to it. Best of luck!