The intro is good just a little too long (i shouldnt be talking lol). The progression needs some work. Add some drums a little here and there to make the build up more suspenseful. 1:08 to the drop is just very bland maybe add an arp or something idk lol. Also maybe put a noiser w/ a lowpassed filter and make it the riser, but other than that the drop is superb just add some bass to it. I like it tho!