IIIIICCEELAAAANNNDD!!!!! (sorry I just love your picture :3) Anyway, I like the melody and beat pattern of the instrumental. Not too simple, not too complex~ You're off to a great start, keep up the good work!
Cool track! Liked it. I do agree with XJM that a note sounded a little off...but it's a real great track and start to something even better so keep working on it!
i actually noticed that. am working on fixing it
it's very simple. Just make sure your tones sound okay together. One note sounded a little off. Straight beat... not a bad start. Might improve more when I get into rhythm in Music Theory.