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at the start i mean i mean the melody loop

what loop is that?

yeah who's door are you at?

Yeah try to make your own melodies and when you mix it up try not to rush into it

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yeh ngl the first part was pretty fire

lmaooooooooo

yeah, dey sound like completely diff songs. first part was hard doe. like Hscoa said, jus try to use the same loops from one pack or make yo own melodies if u want. also, try workin on yo arrangement, start of wit the intro, make a drop, hook, verse, hook, verse n outro. and make sure to solo out stuff sometimes n make pauses to keep the beat interstin. idk doe, u might jus be doin all dis fo fun, n if u are, jus disregard everythin i said n keep havin fun lmao

Not bad, try to make your own melodies instead of loops because the random loops mixed together gives a confusing mess of genres that don't fit at all, for example lofi hip hop and dubstep. Not a bad sound though just a critique. Also, if you do prefer loops instead of your own sounds, try using loops from one sample pack, like only the lofi hip hop pack, instead of lofi and dubstep.

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