Thank you for the feedback Noah, I appreciate it. I'll take it into consideration.
I can't remember if this is a loop or a pre-made midi. But try making your tracks more original, either by making your own sound and midi or chopping up and messing with loops more. You have a lot of potential and musical sense, just remember learning this stuff takes time and it took me months. Creating original stuff will make you grow faster and will help allow you to make more of what you want instead of being limited to another persons talents. Keep producing -Noah