by the look of your comments section, you have been pestering everyone on soundation. its simple and doesn't really go anywhere. try doing a remix to help understand how melodies are structured.
You PM'd me for feedback but all I can really do is echo the comments people have already left here. This track has definitely improved from the last one so good job on that! :) What HIROYO said about the beat is correct; it's good, but a little spicing with other percussive instruments as well as layering them will grant you a fuller, richer sound and fill in the dead space. The melody itself sounds nice :) One way to improve it a little would be to add some reverb. Personally, I always use about 70-90% reverb on my tracks. All in all, you're still young and still learning! Good luck! :)
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Is to good
Phil | THX FOR 100 FOLLOWERS !
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by the look of your comments section, you have been pestering everyone on soundation. its simple and doesn't really go anywhere. try doing a remix to help understand how melodies are structured.
Phil | THX FOR 100 FOLLOWERS !
Thx guys
Alyssium
You PM'd me for feedback but all I can really do is echo the comments people have already left here. This track has definitely improved from the last one so good job on that! :) What HIROYO said about the beat is correct; it's good, but a little spicing with other percussive instruments as well as layering them will grant you a fuller, richer sound and fill in the dead space. The melody itself sounds nice :) One way to improve it a little would be to add some reverb. Personally, I always use about 70-90% reverb on my tracks. All in all, you're still young and still learning! Good luck! :)
Phil | THX FOR 100 FOLLOWERS !
Thx man