by the look of your comments section, you have been pestering everyone on soundation. its simple and doesn't really go anywhere. try doing a remix to help understand how melodies are structured.
You PM'd me for feedback but all I can really do is echo the comments people have already left here. This track has definitely improved from the last one so good job on that! :) What HIROYO said about the beat is correct; it's good, but a little spicing with other percussive instruments as well as layering them will grant you a fuller, richer sound and fill in the dead space. The melody itself sounds nice :) One way to improve it a little would be to add some reverb. Personally, I always use about 70-90% reverb on my tracks. All in all, you're still young and still learning! Good luck! :)
ok you said you want feedback imma be 100% with you. the mixing on this sucks try to make the sounds more uniform also take of some of the low ends on that bass. the beat is easy to follow BUT could still use some work. than around 20 sec the bass sounds off tempo. than at 25 sec it just gets so messy. other than all that i have to say you have gotten better. and im not a pro so take all this with a pinch of salt. good luck in your music journey :)
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Is to good
Phil | THX FOR 100 FOLLOWERS !
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by the look of your comments section, you have been pestering everyone on soundation. its simple and doesn't really go anywhere. try doing a remix to help understand how melodies are structured.
Phil | THX FOR 100 FOLLOWERS !
Thx guys
Alyssium
You PM'd me for feedback but all I can really do is echo the comments people have already left here. This track has definitely improved from the last one so good job on that! :) What HIROYO said about the beat is correct; it's good, but a little spicing with other percussive instruments as well as layering them will grant you a fuller, richer sound and fill in the dead space. The melody itself sounds nice :) One way to improve it a little would be to add some reverb. Personally, I always use about 70-90% reverb on my tracks. All in all, you're still young and still learning! Good luck! :)
HIROYO
ok you said you want feedback imma be 100% with you. the mixing on this sucks try to make the sounds more uniform also take of some of the low ends on that bass. the beat is easy to follow BUT could still use some work. than around 20 sec the bass sounds off tempo. than at 25 sec it just gets so messy. other than all that i have to say you have gotten better. and im not a pro so take all this with a pinch of salt. good luck in your music journey :)