This is really nice actually, I love the chords and the melodies and I can actually hear you acting on previous feedback I've given, which I always like to hear. But, a few things: the piano could've had a few more lower and higher notes in the chords and there could've been a white noise sweep at 0:13 to ease the transition a bit. The arp needed a little less depth to it and I think it's a little to loud. The buildup does start to get a little repetetive, but that's a problem I have too, and it'll get better with practise. The kick couldve been louder too.
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Ooz!e454 (Using the studio limitedly)
of course, a remix https://soundation.com/user/ScamsStacks/track/missing-you-trap-remix +100 XD
Clever Whiz
@Shockwave, thanks man
MONOXIDE
i luv zeh arp. bootyful mehlodes
DUTCH
V I actually thought that was the genre Clever Whiz was going for lol
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If the arp was quieter this would be a really great chill trap track
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I don't think 808s would go good with this. I listen more and more and I get more of a chill trap feel than hard 808 driven trap
Clever Whiz
@NKM thanks for the feedback :D
BaconBurger
But yeah, I think this is nice, and I can definitely see improvement :)
BaconBurger
This is really nice actually, I love the chords and the melodies and I can actually hear you acting on previous feedback I've given, which I always like to hear. But, a few things: the piano could've had a few more lower and higher notes in the chords and there could've been a white noise sweep at 0:13 to ease the transition a bit. The arp needed a little less depth to it and I think it's a little to loud. The buildup does start to get a little repetetive, but that's a problem I have too, and it'll get better with practise. The kick couldve been louder too.
Clever Whiz
@BJORNBERG thanks :)