Add some chords. The first beat is very off beat. Keep your snare on the second and fourth. Also add a riser or something for between the gap. Further add some hihats to fill it up.
The filter is a little bit much. Maybe when the drop happens, you should reduce the filter right before it happens; it gives a dramatic emphasis to the rise.
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DUTCH
Add some chords. The first beat is very off beat. Keep your snare on the second and fourth. Also add a riser or something for between the gap. Further add some hihats to fill it up.
Colors of Galore
Overall pretty good
Colors of Galore
The filter is a little bit much. Maybe when the drop happens, you should reduce the filter right before it happens; it gives a dramatic emphasis to the rise.