Wow Lois, you have some great feedback already. I really like your choice of sounds and even though it's a very simple track it really works. You now need to add some effects to make it have a more unique sound.
I like the introduction. You have used rhythm.You could use more sounds because its abit boring because it keeps on repeating
All your beats go really well together.
its good that it stops then carries on, your track is really good
i really like your intro and i like the bit when it goes quite and then loud it is really good.
i like the intro in the music and i also like the rhythm.
i like your track because you have used good rhythms .you have also mixed tracks well.
i liked the structure.