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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

LOVE the flow of your A section and the beauty of your C section! I think your B section could be cleaned up a bit, there might be one too many sounds in there. I liked it best towards the end. Check your copy and pasting in your last A section because the same flow as the first two is just not happening there. Overall, love it, make these little changes and you'll he on your way to an A plus!

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