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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Good start, Tyler! Your A section needs a melody line (a part you could sing, like a synth or an instrument part). Your B section works pretty well, but I would cut off some of the end of it, it's a little too long. Your transition to your C section is unnecessary, but I really like your C section itself! Try these edits and see what you can do. Good luck!