I really love the instruments, but I think the vocals fit too much in this song, and it sounds like some stuff is out of key. Ive gotta admit this meldody is love
cheers guys !
If I could suggest one thing, it would be:
See if you can take the lyrics, where they say "How I miss the little", and see if you can use the pitch tool and compact it, then the stretch tool and compress it back, (or vice versa) changing the pitch from that off-key pitch to one more in key? Perhaps one half step down? The vocal tuner may help too, but it may sound to artificial... I don't know.
It would be so nice, if Your vocals sounded better, but i know, that it's not up to you. I love what you did to this song. You brought it to a soulfull house, and i love it!
Thank you !
Oh wow... points for originality there man! Very few people can speed up the vocals and make it sound right. NICE!