The melody and overall concept is really nice, but the chords should really be pitched down an octave with a separate channel for bass in the first half of the song, there are too many high-pitched components going on. Another prominent issue, the arp that accompanies the melody during the drops sounds like it's the same instrument and the same volume. The two clash together too much, so I would either make the arp quieter and a different synth sound, or just remove it all together. I hope you found this helpful!
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Voxel
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Voxel
About 4 days
K I T C S H
How long did this take you?
Voxel
ok
Trillan
The melody and overall concept is really nice, but the chords should really be pitched down an octave with a separate channel for bass in the first half of the song, there are too many high-pitched components going on. Another prominent issue, the arp that accompanies the melody during the drops sounds like it's the same instrument and the same volume. The two clash together too much, so I would either make the arp quieter and a different synth sound, or just remove it all together. I hope you found this helpful!
Voxel
I made a snowman but my sister landed on it! xD
roix
it started snowing on thursday for me.
Voxel
Its finally snowing over here.
Voxel
@Roix: Dont beat urself up!
Geo
Amazing!