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Smerkalot Avatar
Smerkalot
about 8 years ago

You did not change the clip three minutes in, and this song would have fit the criteria had you changed that.

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Burrito2
about 8 years ago

I hate to be the one to say it, but you kinda used the exact sound clips from the PBIS lesson we did, but otherwise i like the beat [No offense intended towards you].

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Snickers54
about 8 years ago

At about 25 seconds, you switch the clips really fast, you should fade the old one out and the new one in. I love the switch throughout the 50-80 second mark. Another abrupt ending at 1:26, might want to fix that. I like how you go and repeat some of the same tracks at different parts of the song. At about 4 minutes, it sounds like there isn't anything playing. A few abrupt endings, but otherwise very good song.

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Smerkalot
about 8 years ago

Three minutes in, the clip you add and is then playing on it's own does not seem to fit with the rest of the song. Otherwise, very nice job!

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