Yes, not bad, loved the flow of it. Great work.
Alright, if you want to get good at making music (which you already seem to be) I would recommend just one simple thing: listening to music. It's simple. Listen to professionally made songs from famous people, and just try to notice how their songs are structured. Chorus, verse, chorus, verse... and how they tie the different notes together. There should be some kind of pattern to the song (which you also had in "Apocalypse") that will make the song intriguing. I left a like! And you have a new follower! Check out some of my songs? And good luck in making musicy stuffs.