0:28 transition to the next section was a bit sudden (thinning of texture was too sudden), 0:45 same issue (Suggestion: continue the rhythm and build on the texture with the melody) Good use of a variety of sounds (timbre)
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tanwensiu
0:28 transition to the next section was a bit sudden (thinning of texture was too sudden), 0:45 same issue (Suggestion: continue the rhythm and build on the texture with the melody) Good use of a variety of sounds (timbre)